Monday 20 April 2020
quick write.
It was hard at first because I needed to work on my sentence structure. But luckily I have my great father Geoff and he helped me finish it.
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Hi Elijah,
ReplyDeleteI wanted to read your Quick rite but I couldn't see it, can you post it oo. Its great that dad is helping you, guess he will be learning too.
I hope you wrote some great sentences, I look forward to reading them
Mrs Thompson
can you see it now?
ReplyDeleteHi Elijah
ReplyDeleteLucky you have your Dad to give you a helping hand!
I enjoyed reading your take on our sentence starter and I want to know what happens next - a ginormous what? Oh the suspense!
It would be great if you could add speech marks for the parts when people are speaking and start each one on a new line.
Ngā mihi
Mrs Parsons
Well done, Elijah! What a great piece of writing you have produced with the support of your Dad. I agree with Mrs Parson the use of speech marks would help show us when someone is talking and has finished talking. If you are unsure of how to do this, check in with your teachers, I'm sure they can help out or you could watch a you tube clip about speech marks. Awesome learning!
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