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Tuesday 12 May 2020
Great wall of china.
this was pretty fun but next time I want to add some more paragraphs.and I really want to no why it is so long.
Hi Elijah Isn't the Great Wall of China amazing! Would you like to see it one day? You have shared some good facts, are they in your own words? Remember to give the name of things capital letters. Ngā Mihi Mrs Parsons
Great work Elijah, but I would like you to go back and check how many miles or kilometres long the Great Wall of China Really is... Keep up the good work, Mrs Devine
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Hi Elijah
ReplyDeleteIsn't the Great Wall of China amazing! Would you like to see it one day?
You have shared some good facts, are they in your own words?
Remember to give the name of things capital letters.
Ngā Mihi
Mrs Parsons
Great work Elijah, but I would like you to go back and check how many miles or kilometres long the Great Wall of China Really is...
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work,
Mrs Devine