Tuesday 12 May 2020

Great wall of china.


 this was pretty fun but next time I want to add some more paragraphs.and I really want to no why it is so long.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Elijah
    Isn't the Great Wall of China amazing! Would you like to see it one day?
    You have shared some good facts, are they in your own words?
    Remember to give the name of things capital letters.
    Ngā Mihi
    Mrs Parsons

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  2. Great work Elijah, but I would like you to go back and check how many miles or kilometres long the Great Wall of China Really is...
    Keep up the good work,
    Mrs Devine

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